In 7 days, find out what’s wrong with your sales page and how to fix it
Just Like
Miranda...
In a small brick office in Nashville on a cold December day, business consultant Miranda Lay's launch date was one-and-a-half months away.
But every time she thought about her sales page, something in her paused. She couldn’t put her finger on why, but she had a nagging feeling it would miss the mark.
As she sat in her overstuffed office chair slogging through emails, Miranda decided to look at her main competitor’s sales page.
When she saw the headline, she got really worried.
Compared to this sales page, her perfect (would-be) clients were NOT going to see that she understood them on a gut level — even though the new offer she was launching was something her people dearly needed…and even though she was backed by raving clients and strong referrals.
Her launch was in six weeks, and as she knew from experience, those weeks click by fast.
Hoping her own sales page would work out wasn’t going to cut it anymore.
The Fastest Way to Know Which Parts Fall Short and How to Fix Them
Miranda switched tabs, opened her email, and clicked compose:
When I saw her email asking for help, I sent her a form with a few questions, like:
Some of them made her hesitate because even as a seasoned business owner, she had to slow down and think more deeply about her people.
But if she threw out a generic response and moved on, her sales page would fall short of conversions, so she made herself continue to think and type.
In a few minutes, she finished the form and hit submit.
You Can’t Make Your Sales Page Stronger
Without Knowing Where It’s Weak
When Miranda got her sales page audit from me, she jumped in. She could see which sentences could lose people, why she needed to move certain sections further up or down the page, how to make flimsy paragraphs more powerful, and more.
Miranda emailed me:
When she launched that winter, Miranda knew she was saying what her people needed to hear.
Today, Miranda has testimonial after testimonial from thrilled clients who completed the program. It’s now one of her main offerings.
Like Miranda, you shouldn’t lose out on perfect clients just because your sales page is weak.
In 7 days, get a sales page audit that shows you what’s wrong with your page and how to fix it.
You’ll be taken to a short form to drop in your link and give some details about it.
How This Works
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You send me your sales page link and provide details on your audience and offer.
I review your sales page and put all my notes in a document.
You receive your doc along with a brief video where I walk you through your suggestions.
We talk for 30 minutes about any questions you have so you’re confident to make the changes.
You get two weeks of email support. I’ll respond to each email within one business day.
What I Look For
With just these recommendations and ideas, you can find out what’s weak on your page and how to make it stronger.
Headlines
Do they grab attention? Are they clear? Do they keep people reading?
Body Copy
Repetitive language? Unnecessary words? Drawn-out sentences?
CTA Buttons
Do they make someone want to click on them?
Visuals
Do the visuals help drive the point home? What purpose do they serve?
Testimonials
Are they placed in the right spots? In enough spots?
Structure
Do sections flow together? Is everything laid out in the right order?
What
You
Get.
$300
7-Day Turnaround
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Written recommendations for headlines, body copy, CTAs, visuals, testimonials, and structure
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Video recording walk-through of the recommendations
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30-minute recorded Q&A call to ask all your questions
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Two weeks of email support, starting the day after the Q&A call
Taylor - this is brilliant! I feel excited to buy this and I’m not even in the target audience!
Haley Greene, Email Copywriter and Strategist